It brings tears to my eyes
to see a pivot animation that has a Flash progress bar on it. I mean if you have Flash to make a toolbar with, just make a movie with it, and it'll be better received on Newgrounds. There's a legacy of hating Pivot animators on this site, so my personal advice: Use Flash. Even if you just have the SWF & FLV Toolbox like you said in the top of the screen, if you're willing to get an unregistered copy of that, you're probably willing to get a copy of Flash. Just saying.
But when it comes down to the animation itself, it's pretty choppy and unrealistic. If you are going to work on Newgrounds using Pivot, you need to be REALLY good at it. Otherwise, nothing you create will see a good score here on Newgrounds.
I just posted a flash animation. Guess what, it got a lower score than most of my pivs. What's that telling me?
I like it, but I feel a little bad for that kid. Oh well. Anyways, great job.
Yeah during lipsyncing my little sister kept saying awwwww when she heard the little boy, i had to slap her becuase the boys voice is me sped up doing a weird accent :D
Great litle Flash you got Here!
Very fluent and smooth animation. At first, I thought it was just going to be another boring stick movie, but you really proved me wrong. It captured my attention and entertained me. Good job!
It's informative, but it seems that the animation was a bit lacking. Smoother animation and music, as you said, on the next draft, would make for a better Flash
Your futile attempts
to entertain me are laughable. What you lack in dancing skill you make up for in creating more want for us to give you such bad scores. In that aspect, and that aspect alone, this movie showcases your talent.
The fist sequence made me convinced that this was going to be just another sprite movie, but then other characters entered and gave it a nice fell. A bit of a lack of a plot, in my opinion, but nonetheless, a nice Flash to watch.
Hehe, yeh I knew I always wanted to experiment with sprites, and after doing so It can become very fun, but also quick and easy if you get them from a website. While some sprite movies are totally epic and awesome (like MKvsSF and Super Mario Reloaded)
While making a whole sprite movie sounds kind of intimidating and boring for some reason, throwing them into a scene real quick seemed to have a positive effect =)
Thanks alot for your review, kind words, and the high score. I really appreciate it =)
A bit short, but pretty well animated, which really counts when making a stickman Flash. To make it shine out from all of the others that get blammed daily, you have to make it unique. This, to me, feels unique. Good job.
Good for a first attempt. Hopefully as you get more accustomed to the Flash environment we'll be able to see more work from you.
This is a great animation. I'd buy your book, but I'm broke.
Can't understand a word of it, but it looks nice and seems pretty funny. You should upload a version in English.
Yeah, with the other episodes i'd do english subtitles but my score got down because of my bad translation. :(
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